posted by AKIRA @ 8:35 PM 2 comments
you might want to change the phrase "at first time" to give it a clearer meaning
Is "at first time" supposed to be "a first time"? That makes it a noun phrase and then it makes sense :-)
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you might want to change the phrase "at first time" to give it a clearer meaning
Is "at first time" supposed to be "a first time"? That makes it a noun phrase and then it makes sense :-)
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