Sin-cane: "Making Friends"
Making Friends
Suddenly
Down the street
Five new people
To have some crazy fun
Because they are all so entertaining!
I've changed this a bit, so what do you think about the verb phrase line (2nd to last)?
posted by Anonymous @ 11:58 AM
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Hummm. Yeah maybe re-do the last two lines. "To get to know" instead of To have some crazy fun-just a suggestion. "Suddenly" is definitely an attention-getter.
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