cinquain: "Depending"
Depending
Always
Despite my doubts
Your unchangeable grace
To shine your strong gentle love
Because the Sun does not depend on clouds
Elise
WR330
posted by Anonymous @ 11:31 PM
1 comments
Tuesday, May 16, 2006
Always
Despite my doubts
Your unchangeable grace
To shine your strong gentle love
Because the Sun does not depend on clouds
Elise
WR330
1 Comments:
I think that this is a powerful poem; I especially love the sun/cloud imagery! I also like the verb "to shine" which flows right into the sune imagery. Great job!
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