Crying
Endlessly
Over you
Tiny rain drops
Running down my cheeks
Because you left me alone
posted by Hillary @ 1:25 PM
3 comments
Endlessly
posted by Hillary @ 1:25 PM
3 comments
3 Comments:
I like that this is explicit, and I can't find any errors. Good job!
Very good job on your cinquain. The format works well for this topic. As the tears build so do your thoughts of sadness.
This is sad! And yes, I am captain obvious. Anyway, I like it and it seems to follow all the rules, so I don't really have any useful feedback. Nicely done.
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