cinquain: "Depending"

Depending

Always
Despite my doubts
Your unchangeable grace
To shine your strong gentle love
Because the Sun does not depend on clouds



Elise
WR330

Sin-cane: "Making Friends"

Making Friends

Suddenly
Down the street
Five new people
To have some crazy fun
Because they are all so entertaining!


I've changed this a bit, so what do you think about the verb phrase line (2nd to last)?

Cinquian - "Wondering"

Wondering
Always
About you
Every day
To know if you still care
Even though you're gone





What do you guys think of the second to last line? Does it work? Any suggestions?